Task 14: Draft & Final Script
Potential script number 1.
Customer walks to subway under the road and meets
his dealer.
Customer: "Have you got anymore?"
Drug dealer: "Yes, have you got my
money?"
Customer: "Nah sorry I cant pay"
Drug dealer: "I need the money,
urgently!"
Customer: "Well I don't have it!"
Drug dealer turns and looks and customer
menacingly. He then begins to chase the customer. Customer runs and the drug
dealer chases him. The drug dealer proceeds to beat him up.
Customer: "No, please!"
Drug dealer: "I need the money, now!"
Customer: "I'm sorry"
Drug dealer begins to beat him up.
Customer: "Aah, please!"
Customer: "STOP!"
Drug dealer: "Next time you pay!"
Drug dealer proceeds to walk away
Potential Script number 2.
Aidan
looking around kitchen area, picks up eviction note and whacks is hands on the
table whilst looking up.
Aidan: I NEED MY MONEY!
Holding
his head and looking down
Aidan: I can’t wait any longer, I need my money by
7, I cannot get evicted. (whisper)
Walks
out of set of flats, walking clumsly and also cautiously
Aidan
rings Nathan
Aidan: Hey bruv, meet me down subway yeah, 20
minutes. Be there mate
Nathan: Sound mate, I’ll get there early and ill
get the money now.
Aidan
cuts off
Aidan
walks to the subway
Aidan: Hey mate, got my lettuce?
Nathan: well… there’s a slight problem bruv.
Aidan: But you have the cash yeah mate.
Nathan: that’s the problem mate, I don’t have it on
me or at home, theres none at home. I must have spent it on food or something.
Aidan: (raised voice) Yes that is a problem, I need
the money by 7 latest.
Nathan: Sorry fam, thers no way I will be able to
get a spare £40 to you tonight!
Aidan turns away and looks out the other
dide of the subway
Aidan: You must be joking!
Nathan
runs away
Aidan
chases him
Aidan: youre not getting away from me you prick.
Nathan
turns around
Aidan
pushes him and Nathan loses balance
Nathan: I cant help it, leave me alone
Aidan: im not going nowhere without my money
Aidan gets in his face and punches Nathan in the face.
Learning Comment
I have thought of 2 scripts which we could use for our opening sequence. I learnt that to make a opening sequence effective, you don't need to include a long script or even a script at all. however, scripts are used to sort of set the scene within the opening couple of minutes. In our sequence we have a script which isn't too long and is associated with crime which is what our narrative is all about. Also, i have used the basic skills to form a script which is relevant to our sequence.